Group Crit

How much practical work has been completed so far? Give some feedback on their current practical progress.

You've completed all of your practical work - including a first, second, and final edit, as well as some practice videos showing the techniques you intended to use.

How many RESEARCH posts have they completed so far?

4

Choose 1 RESEARCH post, read through it, write some positive feedback using the 'research' section of the EXEMPLIFICATION MATRIX

You have included a number of examples, showcasing the research you have completed - e.g. posters. As well as this, a good use of technical language is used.

Choose 1 RESEARCH post, read through it, write about how they could improve this post using the 'research' section of the EXEMPLIFICATION MATRIX

You could improve by going into more detail, analysing the examples you have chosen for your research on the topic of body image.

How many BLOG THE WEEK posts have they completed?

5

Choose 1 BLOG THE WEEK post, read through it, write some positive feedback using the 'problem solving' and/or 'evaluation' sections of the EXEMPLIFICATION MATRIX

You have clearly shown the problems you went through during you filming week and have explained how you have overcome them.

Choose 1 BLOG THE WEEK post, read through it, write some things to improve using the 'problem solving' and/or 'evaluation' sections of the EXEMPLIFICATION MATRIX

You could have taken some pictures of your set up on the day.

Have they included evidence of their experiments and things that they have learned? What feedback can you give them on this?

You have shown the experiments you have done using photoshop - e.g. step by step process. Could link to body image research.

Do you think they have done enough work? Consider the length of the project (2-3 months).

What would you like to see more of?

Reflection of previous weeks work in your blog posts.

Overall, what grade would you currently award them? Why?

Merit - Practical and written work is done well, however, you need to show more examples of your reflection on you work.